by Will Stanton » Tue Jun 23, 2015 4:16 am
The first thing that Miriam would notice was different was the near absence of a wall.
In most people's minds, there's a clear barrier between 'outside' and 'inside'. Even non-telepaths have some natural protection, although it's usually nothing particularly fancy. Here, though, there was just the faintest whisper of a barrier before Miriam is in Will's mindscape, as if whatever walls had been there had been eroded away. It almost certainly would be an odd feeling, and the closest she'd be able to compare it to would be some of the patients in pure catatonic states at Muir--and even they usually had a little more residual barrier. Any telepath worth their stuff could get fairly easy access as things stood.
The second thing that Miriam would notice is the utter wasteland that was Will's mindscape.
It looked like a nuclear bomb had gone off. Sticking towards the sky was the shattered remains of buildings, standing up against a dark, almost blank void. Some structures remained intact enough to possibly enter, but most of them at least looked unsafe, if they even had walls and a ceiling standing. They also were covered in moss, and worn down from elements over time. Something used to be here, but it would take more than a first glance to figure out what.
The third thing that Miriam would notice was the absence of a solid ground.
All the buildings seemed to stick up from the ground halfway through, like they were somewhat buried in it. The 'ground' was perfectly flat and level, but went halfway up doorways, as if everything had been three feet higher at one point.
The fourth thing that Miriam would notice was that she was sinking into the some warm clay as she stood there.
